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AARRGGGHH!!! *whimper* *twitch* *whimper* I thought I had another chapter to read after this one! *sniff* I've been reading this from the begining since it's been so long since I've read any of it. And I could have SWORN that you'd written 18 chapters so far. Oh well.

I attacked this like I do any good novel when I have the time, I devour it as whole as possible. So for the last two or so days I've been mostly glued to my computer. While I don't think of myself as a "one true pairing" kinda girl, I DO tend towards Yojhi/Aya/Schu in all it's wonderul combinations. I find that I don't like most Aya/Ken since I just find the pairing weird. But your A/K was done very well & it furthered the plot. At least I thought so. I'm not sure it would have been the same caliber of story without them being together.

And Aya/Farf in something besides a PWP? You are KIDDING right? Until reading this story that was my general response - to just run screaming into the night. Most writer's can't get a good handle on Farf, sane or insane, much less Farf in a relationship. Your take on him I find fascinating. He's sane but there's still that bit of Berserker that breaks the surface of that sanity every once in awhile. And your "Aya Syndrome" is so amusingly true in fanon *snicker* people tend to find it hard to be neutral about Aya. When, chapters back, I started getting hints of where Aya & Farf were headed I almost stopped reading because it looked like I wounldn't get my favorite threesome but would get Aya/Farf instead. But I was so intrigued by your version of Farf that I decided to stick around. And I'm so very glad I did. While you haven't made me a instant convert, I think I'll be more open to reading Aya/Farf in the future. That is asuming the author writes a decent Farf. *laugh* One of these days I'm going to print this out so I can read it anytime anywhere. So I won't feel quite as compled to read it in great big chunks and can take the time to savor it as it should be savored. So hurry up and finish please?


And as far as muffalettas go - I'm sorry but if it doesn't taste like a New Orleans muffaletta it doesn't deserve to called a muffaletta. It's just a honking big sandwich. :)

--- Morgan

My apologies for the delay in reviewing; I've been wasting time fruitlessly attempting to get my review posted at MediaMiner since last Friday. I never dared hope that you would post so quickly, and WOW did you deliver on your promise from the last chapter! The sheer passion depicted between these two, and the comparison to what they share with their other "lovers" made me a true believer in this pairing. I particularly loved it when Ran turned the table, so to speak, on Far. Showing them as equals and true partners (at least in this arena) was totally believeable, an utter delight, and made me at least (although I think Far as well), very, very happy. Thank you so much for this chapter, and this story. I will try to patiently wait for more.

Oh, hell yes! Gods, I adore this fic to death, especially the FarxAya action...outstanding. I usually don't like Farfie pairings, but I'm thoroughly enjoying this. The dry humor comes off very nicely; you had me laughing out loud repeatedly, and I love it. Excellent job, can't wait for more from you!

chapter 17 was by far the most intense
chapter i had ever read. it was so . . . and
aya and farf, they were . . . i can hardly
say anything. so i will just say amazing chapter
and update soon. now, if you will excuse me, i'm
going to go take myself a cold shower.

Too yummy :D Loved this chapter so much <3 cant wait to see what results all of this will have!
(I love you! you rock)

I always forget things -_- but yeah, I'm very interested to see everyones reactions to this :) you rock, and i love you!

You've never disappointed me before and there was no reason to expect that you'd start now! It speaks volumes sbout you and your abilities that not only was able to comfortably read this chapter, I enjoyed...immensely! The intensity was startling and wonderful, the pacing was perfect, and the lemon(s) was HOT! Well done, RQ!

finally!!! gawd. i've been waiting for that since aya first met farf in new orleans. yer killin' me smalls.

this is by far the most vivid story i've ever read. your description of
new orleans is just wonderfully done. since i'm a native of louisiana myself
i can appreciate this. keep up the wonderful work and also. i am so glad the
teasing is finally over and we are going into the action.

WooT! Not only did you update, but you did 5 chapters at once! Now THAT I love!

This story continues to impress, and it's clear that I'm throughly addicted. I like your OCs quite a bit, and they're used just the right amount. Gah! I'm not even sure what I should fawn over, since it's all awesome.

Just...keep it up, and I'll be happy to go along to wherever you take us...