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for The Sous-Chef

by redqueen

person Jet Mykles
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*chokes* what's next?! Why's Farf got that look in his eye? Gah!
I love where everyone's ended up. Well, except the whole Aya/Ken thing breaks my heart. Poor Kenkun! *sobs*
This is the first non Aya/Yohji WK fanfic I've read that I really like. Not an easy thing since I really like the two of them together. Especially not easy since this story has them once being together.
Well done!
person Blythe
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, Farfie may be sane, but he's still a little scary. Uh-oh, I probably shouldn't have called him that... I love Aya and I feel bad for him, depression sucks and I hope he's able to kick its sorry ass very soon, I just hate seeing him in such a funk. I'm looking forward to learning all that a sous chef has to know and hoping that Aya excels at it, as he does most things. As always, looking forward to the next chapter.
person Eboni
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So now we know why the story is called Sous-chef. I'm guesing a lot of the story from now on will take place in Farfarello's kitchen. Oooh that just sounds wrong: Farfarello's kitchen.

Yohji playing the role of overprotective boyfriend is hilarious The mess that would have become of him stabbing Farfarello with the wine bottle would have been something to see...and read ;)

Farfarello and Schuldig's game. That sounds like something I would just say: Pax! I yield! Game over! Weirdos. But hey, we don't come from the same background so hide amd seek and stab and bleed may be the same thing in our different worlds lol.

Should we be expecting anymore guests? Like will Nagi, Crawford, or Mamarou come to visit?

Well, I enjoyed the chapter. I haven't seen anything new from anyone in such a long while I thought everyone had quit writing... (like I should talk, hah), so thank you for the update!
person drunkelnatt
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love what you did to Farfarello. And of course, I'm curious as to what will happen to Aya in the near future. Good writing.
person Azure and Onyx
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! This is brilliant. It flows so nicely and I can't wait to see what happens next. And Schu! I love Schu. *cuddles Schu* You've written him perfectly. He's so much better when he's helping Weiss. I must say, though, I'm kind of glad Ken is out of the picture for now. I don't have anything against him, but Aya is just so much better with Yohji. (and/or Schuldig) Anyway, keep writing. I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
person Jukebox
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chap! It didn't feel rushed to me. I think it's hilarious that Farf is the head chef in a New Orleans restaurant. Awesome! The final goodbye to Ken was very hot too! I hope you're not planning to hook Aya up with Farf *shudders* :^D Looking forward to the next chap.
person Eboni
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The Eye of Sauron and Farfarello's eye. Hrm... I dunno, I think maybe Farfie could take that as a compliment. I mean, Sauron's famous as hell, lol.

A little sad we didn't get to spend more time and Tokyo with Nagi but the little summary of events was nice. Nagi had everybody but Yohji, huh? Impressive. Yohji's reaction: OO. Hehehe.

Chef Farfie...I dunno if I could have eaten there. I'd start thinking of diced kitties mixed around in my salad. I like how he kept referring to Aya and Yohji as cats. Cute!

Take care. Great chapter!
person Blythe
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know what I love about this story? I have no idea where it's going, what's going to happen next, and where it'll all end. And I think that's fabulous. So, this isn't so much a review as a "thank you." For being talented, for sharing this with us, and for not being predictable. I wait, as always, with bated breath for the next chapter.
person Gingitsune
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really think that it's sweet and touching that Aya finally admitted his love to Ken before he was taken away. I love your Farf! Wanna see more of him.
person paranoidcharlotte
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT! It's about time you got Farfie in there I love Farfie! Oh poor Ken are you going to end upp being nice to him in the end or will he suffer even more?

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