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Wow, I can't believe this only has 9 reviews so far. I have to say I was very skeptical of reading it in the begining and I had to force myself to read through the "everyone wants aya" or "everyone admires aya blah blah blah" things. But overall the writing really is great. I like the chracterations that you are showing, and I can see why you are doing what you are with the whole Aya thing. So I really hope you don't give up on this and that you do continue but I think this could turn out to be one of the better Weiss Kreuz fanfics out there.


(god I'm hopeing though for a more possesive Schuldig heheheee I love when Schuldig is all Yohji's mine hehehee and of course Yohji being don't worry Schu, I'm yours, yes I'm a loser lol ^_^)

I'm really, really enjoying this fic. I love the Schu/Yohji pairing and you write their characters just so, so well. I hope you continue soon!

This story is great! I love Schu and I like him with Yohji. I hope to see more soon!

Just finished chapter 4 and it is, as expected, amazing. Your desciptors are so vivid that I could see the scene in my mind and feel the turmoil of each character. This really is spectacular and I am looking forward to more.

This is really great so far! It's well written and easy to feel the emotions as well as visualize the scene. Looking forward to the updates and where you take this. Sounds like almost everyone's had a piece of Aya. The Quatre & Nagi incident with Aya that Schu hinted at sounds kind of non-conish maybe - I'll be as interested as Yohji to hear the details on what went down. I also hope this turns into a threesome with Schu/Yohji/Aya. I'd love to see Schu work with Yohji to heal a broken Aya.

Wow! I'm sorry I took so long to read chapter 3, but it was amazing! Steamy, heart-breaking, and redeeming! Beautifully written. I'm so looking forward to more!

Yea! So glad you re-posted! So, this isn't going to be nearly as nice as the original review, mostly because I can't remember all of what I said, but I'll try. I think this is a wonderful story. Your writing is strong and vivid, really drawing the reader into your world. Your intensity is perfect for these characters and their situations and the smattering of humor is a welcome reprieve, keeping the reader from emotional overload. I'm so looking forward to future chapters!

Man, what a great story!!! To think I almost overlooked it because the title didn't interest me. What a treat I would have missed. I am really looking forward to the continuation of this story, and thanks so much for sharing it with us.

Ah I tried to leave a review..yesterday I think and AFF was having problems. I think you had more reviews than there are now too. Anyways, wanted to say this is very enjoyable so far! It's well written and some scenes are quite juicy (the body paint scene...*chuckles*...and first time with Aya was hot!). I hope this becomes a threesome of Schu/Yohji/Aya. And I definitely hope Aya-chan gets a little lesson in the pitfalls of brattiness. She needs to feel guilty and learn to appreciate everything that's been done for/given to/sacrificed for her. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I wasn't sure how i felt about this story up to this point, i just wanted to read more and see how i felt. I just finished chapter 3 and i've decided i love it. More please! Once the relationships started developing out and the characters got fleshier -- well, its just shaping up in a very lovely way.