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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please write more i am loving your stories to bits! oooh how bout a story about sena training in the rain and getting soaked and muddy hiruma would totally molest him :3 then again he always does lol
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yep this is like my umphed time reading this so id though id review for once lol
but n e way lunapoke all these little drabbles would be much better continued
oh yes much better except for the one where sena dies that was sad... stupid sad ones making people cry
n e ways i like all ur eyeshield stories but u need to write more because no one else has a complete grasp of the characters like u
so wrtie a long fic wit extra smut and deticate to me cuase i support all ur stories u write even if ive never heard of that certain anime lol
k peace
but n e way lunapoke all these little drabbles would be much better continued
oh yes much better except for the one where sena dies that was sad... stupid sad ones making people cry
n e ways i like all ur eyeshield stories but u need to write more because no one else has a complete grasp of the characters like u
so wrtie a long fic wit extra smut and deticate to me cuase i support all ur stories u write even if ive never heard of that certain anime lol
k peace
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwws, these are really cute! Keep it up, okies?
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Luna, you are a fantastic writer. *Hugs* There is not nearly enough Eyesield stuff on the net... And there's even less on here than on normal fanfiction. Bravo to you.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you should include the lemons that are cut off. They'd be so hot.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another update! And I see you've added another story! I think we're the only two populating the Eyeshield 21 fics on aff..-sniffs-
So this means I have to keep writing with fiery passion and and and I hope you do the same as well! This chapter sure made me think of what Hiruma's hands would feel like running over my flesh and thats..really hot. lol
Hope you add another hot lemony hinting chapter soon!
So this means I have to keep writing with fiery passion and and and I hope you do the same as well! This chapter sure made me think of what Hiruma's hands would feel like running over my flesh and thats..really hot. lol
Hope you add another hot lemony hinting chapter soon!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yayyy this is your fan and fellow sena/hiruma writer Biokun << I love how you keep updating so frequently!;-; Im just eating up all the fresh chapters and they're all drool-worthy. On chapter seven((the one Im reviewing right now)) this chapter was uber sad and I was angry at first cause I was like,'nooooOOO!!!' then I was like...'Woah..that was really good...'
:XD
And I see you're up to chapter 10 now so Im gonna go check out and review those ones too
:XD
And I see you're up to chapter 10 now so Im gonna go check out and review those ones too
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-cries- omg, it cut off the rest of my last review. bastard review thingeh!
Anyways... Hot chapter..lol First Hiruma/Sena water makeout scene Ive ever reado-o
On to the next chapter!
Anyways... Hot chapter..lol First Hiruma/Sena water makeout scene Ive ever reado-o
On to the next chapter!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eyaahhh Sena kun is so cute..lol I have noticed a pattern in your drabble collection, Hiruma is asleep for most of Sena's excursions. Its funny, poor Sena turns sneaky to help his beloved Hirumakun whenever he falls asleep. If I were Hiruma Id be paranoid to fall asleep for fear of the 'kuso chibi' sneaking up on me to fuss over me. Though...it might be kinda nice..-shifty eyes-
Anyways, hope you add another chapter soon!
Your fan, Biokun
Anyways, hope you add another chapter soon!
Your fan, Biokun
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter "untold moment":
HELL YEAH!!! this is what happened after that *shudders* horrible, HORRIBLE hirumamo "moment" =_=x. Now I can safely read Eyeshield 21 again thanks to your little drabble! Although i am really scared, because I heard that in the anime and in the manga are way too many of hirumamo hints TT_TT, I just don't feel safe!! *covers herself with hirusena doujinshis*.
Now, seriously, this was way cute, I loved imagining Sena with wide eyes holding the pack of ice and Hiruma giving up. CUTE. Frigging cute. Screw the bandage Mamori did. Lately your drabbles are getting longer, and the narration is more fluid. (ass kissing so you can provide me of more hirusena, but it is objective comment nonetheless) You're having less typos and avoid using acronyms, which makes the final draft look a lot better (I think I only saw two or three typos in the last drabbles). But what I like more is that you're improving while writing something as smutt-able as hirusena =P
S-Sena with big puppy dog eyes... looking all hurt... @_@ I need a cold shower. NOW.
HELL YEAH!!! this is what happened after that *shudders* horrible, HORRIBLE hirumamo "moment" =_=x. Now I can safely read Eyeshield 21 again thanks to your little drabble! Although i am really scared, because I heard that in the anime and in the manga are way too many of hirumamo hints TT_TT, I just don't feel safe!! *covers herself with hirusena doujinshis*.
Now, seriously, this was way cute, I loved imagining Sena with wide eyes holding the pack of ice and Hiruma giving up. CUTE. Frigging cute. Screw the bandage Mamori did. Lately your drabbles are getting longer, and the narration is more fluid. (ass kissing so you can provide me of more hirusena, but it is objective comment nonetheless) You're having less typos and avoid using acronyms, which makes the final draft look a lot better (I think I only saw two or three typos in the last drabbles). But what I like more is that you're improving while writing something as smutt-able as hirusena =P
S-Sena with big puppy dog eyes... looking all hurt... @_@ I need a cold shower. NOW.