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by Lunapokema

person FirePeleKa
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*whimper*
*whine*
*whimper*
*pout*

Drabble collection, YAY! Sweet and well written. There are tiny mistakes here and there, and it is too short (hey, what can I say, I like your writting and love the pairing) but overall excellent! That being said; what the heck is I Love You, Goodbye? I mean don't get me wrong, it was still well written, but...but...but.... wtf?!?!!??! **Sits over in the corner and pouts** Okay, done now. Keep up the good work, I really do love the stories and there aren't enough fics in the fandom so *applause's great job* *smiles* More Please!
person crazyb1tch85
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Crowds:

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

New HiruSena drabbles! ok, this is pure fluff, I loved it, LOVED it @_@, It made me remember of some mini-manga I saw in a japanese website, but this is so so so so so so so so so cute O_< *thumbs up*

No smutt? this sucks!!! (i did a 180 change huh? hahahaha... ha... ha... ha... *no smutt* @_@)

First of all, I think Hiruma should go with Sena on the bus everyday, that way he has a good excuse to hug him XP. I know I would, screw my own schedule, I would rearrange it so i could meet Sena (Now i'm a downright spooky stalker)
person crazyb1tch85
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"I love you, Goodbye" chapter:

W.T.F~~~~~~~~~????? @_@
Y--y-you... killed.... Sena.... *prepares weapons of mass destruction*

Ok, what happened here?? this is way too angsty, how did Sena actually die? Was being Eyeshield 21 too much for his little body? I still hate Mamori, this has another good reason. Leave them alone, byatch!!! *kicks Mamori away*. No seriously, even if it was angst (I love it as long as the main couple that i like doesnt die... XD) this was beautiful, short as always, but well written nonetheless. That ending indeed reminded me of Romeo And Juliet, although it was far more cryptic (everything happened in the morgue... and Sena on an autopsy table) than Romeo And Juliet. Screw those two, HiruSena looks better =_=

I think I deserve a HiruSena fix after reading this. *goes to open the secret vault with her hirusena doujinshis*
person Yaoi Fan
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Owww...cute moments between Sena and Hiruma...lol...love them!!! Looking forward to some more ^ ^
person fuyutu
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, this first was insanely funny! Aww, all the other guys got their hearts broken.....oh well. Hiruma got Sena and that's all that matters.
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... O.o.... It's hard imagining Hiruma being so incredibly sweet, even to Sena like that.....Hmm makes for some uber cute fanart though. X3
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No!!! How could you just leave the end like that!!!.............anyways now that I'm over that. OMG! Hiruma really does have Demon Ears!! But I like them.....and apparently Sena does too in this Drabble
person fuyutu
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Juumonji. But Sena really does belong to Hiruma. Lol, Hiruma is majorly possesive.
person fuyutu
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I just love mistletoe fics! This one was ultra cuteness! More fanart comes to mind!!!
person Crazyb1tch85
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chappie 4:
quote: "Obviously, the other blonde didn't know his place on the food chain" Yeah screw Juumonji!!! (not in THAT way @_@) Nobody wants him getting in between HiruSena *grabs and throws Juumonji into a bottomless pit, that isn't so bottomless since it's full of poisonous snakes*
quote: "Juumonji glared at the blonde" what is he, insane?!?!?!

This was a very cute (and damn sexy) little one shot, I enjoy reading again and again. Go Hiruma go mark Sena!!!
Oh and thank you so much, merry christmas to you too!!! and Happy New Year!!!

Holy...! Hiruma has a king-sized bed?? the sex he must have! *grabs camera*

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