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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I love the swicth in positions. It was great.
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww.... *it's a bit earlier so she can send a better review* That's a cute fic...
I was thinking about the title and compared that to "things I'll never say". Even though "the words left unsaid" and "things I'll never say" leave the same message, it's the emotion BEHIND the phrases that differ. "things I'll never say" makes it sound spiteful, like that person wants to mae the other in the relationship suffer. "the words left unsaid" makes it sound more... complicated. It's like you can't find the words that can express what you mean. This logic makes sense in my head... ^^;;
N-E-WAY, I liked this fic a bit more than the first one. I think it's because Yamato laid the smackdown, gotta love Yamato. ^^! Now to read the next one. This makes me want to write Takenji and Kekeru fics. ^^!
~*KA*~
I was thinking about the title and compared that to "things I'll never say". Even though "the words left unsaid" and "things I'll never say" leave the same message, it's the emotion BEHIND the phrases that differ. "things I'll never say" makes it sound spiteful, like that person wants to mae the other in the relationship suffer. "the words left unsaid" makes it sound more... complicated. It's like you can't find the words that can express what you mean. This logic makes sense in my head... ^^;;
N-E-WAY, I liked this fic a bit more than the first one. I think it's because Yamato laid the smackdown, gotta love Yamato. ^^! Now to read the next one. This makes me want to write Takenji and Kekeru fics. ^^!
~*KA*~