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.....................O.O I think i'm in love.... with your story(haha gotcha).
Which means I shall cry and be sad if you abandon it. It is really awesome, though I do have a bit of constructive criticism(or as constructive as I get).
1) I'd hate to have to trust those two horny little fuckers to save me >< they forgot about poor little Rio to have sex! It was a nice sex scene but still... such heartless people.
2) Don't lose to the fangirls!!! Don't let them make you force their relationship(besides, it's so much more fun to torture them, isn't it?)! It's not blaringly obvious, but You should write it in your way and not care what they want. If you let them change it, it won't be as good. because, let's just face it: most other people's opinions suck, don't they?
Anyway my point is you're a great writer and should continue! You have an ability that shouldn't be wasted! I think I'm gonna go read your other stories (that is if I've seen the show they're related to >_>) so don't let me down. ^^

will eyes and ayomu be able to save rio or will kanone kill ayomu and will there be lemon please review and update thank you.

Hey there!!! Great chapter!! Ayumu's plan seems a little simple and old fashioned but I think it could work. Ayumu was right though, how could somebody else know about Rio and Eyes being friends? Unless there's someone they know behind all this...Kanone perhaps??...hard to say, but who knows with that creepy mind of his??? Update soon ok?? and more AyumuxEyes plz!!!! Bye!

This is really something. Finally they kissed...properly!! LOL I'll be waiting for the next update and for the big question that will be solved: who's gonna be on top? XDDD

Okay, you managed to catch my attention... Now will you continue, or will this wind up like a crap load of other stories on here? Because seriously, leaving it there, was NOT nice. I'll be waiting...

Wow it's been this long since I reviewed? Heh, sorry about that. Poor Kanone, poor completely mental phycho Kanone. Eyes and Ayumu.......well lets look at it this way they'll die together. Lol, for real though, yay they're together hold up Ayumu won the fight for dominance?! Eyes lost to that(shuts up before she says something smart). Anyway what is his plan? Poor Rio I hope she's okay.

continue please!!! i love EyesxAyumu! What's gonna happen to Rio?? Is Kanone going to do something to Ayumu or Eyes?? Plz update!

hehehe haha Eyes your hooked

Aw crap! Aw hell! Aw shit! Aw, wait a minute how the hell did he end up at Ayumu's apartment?! Kanone just likes to show up out of no where doesn't he? Ayumu's dead, I don't even need the rest of the story. He's just dead on the ground bleeding cause Kanone's going to beat him till he can't breath, and Eyes.....he lived a good life.

Ahnn, Ayumu is so cute when angry! LOL i wonder what Eyes has to do to convince him, uh? ^.~

I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Ja!!