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for Heartbreaker

by Kugatsu

person Alleyb
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! Schwarzwald you rock my socks! *dances* Sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I've been reading this story religiously! (I've also read Amber Flame.. it's awesome too!!!) It seems to me your writing has been improving the more you've been writing. w00t! Keep up the awesome work, and I just wanted to say wonderful new chapters! <3 Hope you update soon!
person me
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a damn place to stop. damn you...
person LadyJ
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn good title for the chapter because it was WRONG where you ended it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gyahh. cliffhangers are evil!

oh the angst, it burns so good. :p

more please!
person Kat
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What are they teaching at Seigaku...

...it's got the gayest tennis boys in all Japan, what do you *think* they're teaching Akutsu? And Nya! Poor Eiji! I hope that works out. And I'm liking your Inui more and more. ^^ All your chars just keep growing on me in fact. XXDD That scene in the locker room was just *classic*. And the bit with Inui and his notebooks. Taichi still deserves to be bitchslapped but I loved how Kaidoh put up with him, and the line about only Momo being allowed to do that.
person RyuichiSakuma2
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's good. ^^ I never expected the Ryoma threesome. xDThis is the one story where I don't like Kaidoh much. Hah. Inui sounds so soffisticated. Funny. >___<
Weeeell. Ya. It's really good so far. Keep going, Onward!
Ja.

-Ryu
person xxkurenaixshixx
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O....this is soo freakin cool....Aku and Kaidou @_@....
though i thought that it was funny cause everyone was liking
Kaidou...XXDD...but man...that Inui...and a agreesive Kaidou X_x..
its like all the Oddest pairings xcept for the OishiEiji minus Echizen...
but hey it works...and i am loving it ^_^...i love InuiKaidou...but hey
anyone with Kaidou ROCKS..even if its a little weird to me XD

man i sooooo cannot wait to read more of this fic to see what happens^^
person me
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
don't like inui without kaidou and noting come between the golden pair...somehow with your mind, you'll stick echizen there, between them.
person MusikVibe
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEy, this is a pretty good story. I've actually meant to read it when you started it, but i just keep passing it by. Apparently I do that with all my favorite stories.

This is quite fun seeing these almost crack pairings. I really like that about the story. Especially with GP + Ryoma. That was shocking really. You have some good ideas flowing. Put em down. I wanna read them. God job and have fun writing!
person Nanaka
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story.... keep up the good work
person Kat
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... honestly I don't know whether I want to murder Akutsu or Taichi more. ... ^)^ Nice chapter!

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