rate_review Reviews

This story shows promise! Interesting twist on the Syaoran and Eriol dynamic by making Eriol submissive. I like it. Can't wait to read more! I can never get enough good CCS fiction

You have me intrigued. Your writing style could use a little work, and you should keep your perspective consistent (1st person, 3rd person; there are other ways to write thoughts besides switching point of view), but it's definitely a good start. Syaoran is one of my favorite characters, and I love to see him tomented, hehe. It's so much fun. I would like to read more, if you're inclined to write it. Thanks for writing and sharing with us.