rate_review Reviews

OMG, this story is amazing... You so totally completely described Aya as I picture him, someone frozen on the outside and conflicted on the inside...

*sniff* It's soo terrible that this is a One-shot... LOL, listed twice in the description for emphasis, I guess =D I would definitely read any story you write, and I would be ecstatic over a continuation of this one *sigh* something to dream about I guess

Seriously, great story, wonderful characterizations, 5 STARS! Yay!

~Shanna

Thanks for letting me know you wrote this hun. I liked it a lot. I'd like you to continue it really, even though you say it's a one-shot. A conflicted Aya is just so damn much fun. I think you got Aya bang on. A little harder to say with Yohji as most of this centered around Aya and what he wanted and felt. That's not to say you didn't get Yohji right. From the little bit we did see of him, I think you did a good job. This just has all kinds of possibilities. And you do know that quite a few of my own arc started life as one-shots so....

You did a terrific job portraying Aya and Yohji! Both were wonderfully in character, and your exploration of the difference between what Aya is thinking and what he allows to show was great. If only Aya had allowed himself a bit of that next step -- perhaps another story? Sad (poignant?) as the ending of the story was, it was very true to both Aya and the anime series.

I rather liked this piece. The tension was well done and I enjoyed the way Aya and Yohji hid their actual interests. If you continued the story, I would definitely read it!

Omg you're not just planning to leave it there are you?? There's another chapter or sequel or soemthing right??