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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG you can't leave off there. GRRR Update!!!! Some YukixKyo stuf is good. Haru is pissed, Yuki is pissed everyone is pissed now. Oh can't wait I want more!!!!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a wonderful chapter! i can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the great work!
kimper :)
kimper :)
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Aaya, what will he do if he hears about this? I can't even imagine. No, I can. He'd smile, that horribly unconvincing sad smile, and maybe braid his hair, before moving on and pretending to be shallow and unaffected. And poor Yuki, he finally gets the courage to accept his feelings, and then put himself out there like that, and what happens? the person he loves gets hurt. And then Haru, who is so torn between the two brothers. So sad, so dramatic. I hope Kyo will be ok, after all, a blow to the head like that is certainly something unfortunate, and I would hate for him to have any perminant damage. Eagarly awaiting the next chapter. Thank you so much for not ending it at 4, I was so happy to see this chapter, and it did not dissapoint.
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please do continue this, I didn't realize you were done and I've been checking almost daily waiting for the next chapter, I love this story and I really hope you will continue it. Such a smooth transition from a simple diversion to falling for each other, and the inner turmoil Haru is experiencing is wonderful.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This is definitely one of the best FB ficcies I've ever read...nice lemons, and pretty realistic reactions on both their parts. Excellent!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you going going to include Kyo in the mix? That would be fantastic! A hot threesome with no Yuki, cause I don't like cause he is just TOO girly looking. Anyways, great work! I can't wait for the next chappie!~
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWW its so cute i love it simply love it, although its better to stay as a one off i still giggle everytime ayame speaks though :D
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yea i love your story so far i can't wait to read the next chapters!!!!!!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's a little depressing but very well written and I loved the lemon I was practically drooling on my keyboard. xD Oh well though great story again hope to read more of your work in the future.
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want another chapter, maybe he learns that he really wasn't a replacement and maybe they love each other??? could happen... this was cute