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by PrinceYuki

person MystressCyanide
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot and sweet and kind of sad all at the same time...excellent work!
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you all for the love and support of my story. Since my other story hasn't gotten to that particular part yet this was my first actual LEMON seen with two men and I was very nervous as to see the outcome with peoples reactions but I am pleasantly surprised to see so many people enjoying it. That makes me very happy.

I have had so many request to keep this story going I am seriously considering it. Everyone who has read it and contacted me through my email is constantly telling me how much they want more and I'm not sure I can hold that off much longer. I am sure of one thing though that I have to put another chapter on Mortality before I add anything to this one or even consider it because that one was first and people have waited longer.

I apologize for grammatical and spelling errors particularily in the beging when it says Haru is sitting...and taking a test or something and I left the word 'desk' out and when Ayame reaches into his color and pulls out his long hair reading his back wow that one really bothers me its supposed to be reaches into his collar and pulls out his long hair reaching to his knees so I am so sorry about that one I am seriously considering editing the chapter and re-submiting it and deleting the original because of that error.

Sorry I kind of tend to babble a little the whole point of this is to thank everyone for their support and for the request to keep this story going. I am seriously going to consider this request and since HaruxAyame are the main couple if anyone would like to see another couple spring forth from this story please let me know and I can see how I can work that into the story...IF I continue.

Thank again everyone I love you all!!!

Nine-Chan
person kimper
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I would love to see another chapter!

kimper :)
person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it would be a crying shame if this didn't go pass the first chapter. so please cont. this story and i swear i will review every chapter you put out. this was soooo good and one of my secret favorite pairings.


so please don't put the pot on the back burner^_^V
person crimson psycho
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really wonderfull story. There is not nearly enough of this pairing. I really like the way you had written out both Ayame's and Haru's points of view. I hope this story is not a one shot. It would be great to see how their relationship could develop further.

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