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for Hoshi no Tengoku (Star of Heaven)

by Lunapokema

schedule August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Loved this! I hope you do more soon! Thank you!
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Must. Continue. No seriously, you just have too. It is soo hard to find a good Hiru/Sena (ongoing) fic and I love the way this is written. So please. You must. Continue.
person Nonny
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it
wish you would update
person JK
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Everyone just keeps fainting on them don't they? lol
person jasminelove
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, funny and cute. I'm really excited to see what type of parents Hiruma has. This story is great. It's like my third time reading it. I hope that you update soon!

person Esca
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::snigger:: Poor Sena - everybody seems to be fainting on him! I want to know how they got together!
person Houseki
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ya-HA!! I am totally diggin this... it's corny, yet completely cute and right on with characterization. Hiruma and Sena are my fav pairing and there are so few ES21 fics out there it just makes me want to cry *cries* *cough* yeah so anywho, thank you for writing this and continuing this... I shall check back soon for an update! *hugs*

Houseki
person crazyb1tch85
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go away, Mamori!!! grrrrr.... But I like her thoughts of Hiruma molesting Sena while he's unconscious... maybe we can make a yaoi fangirl out of her ^^

Anywho, I have read this in the live journal already, but since there are some whiny people who won't click on a fic because it doesn't have any reviews or crap like that (guilty. sometimes though) I'm gonna review it again (plus i always forget what i write, and i enjoy reading fanfics all over again ^^)

We can see in chapter one that Hiruma gives a rat-ass about the Christmas Bowl... after finding out his love for Sena of course. Like I said, he seems a bit out of character, but come on, who wouldn't be serious while proposig someone else? Personally i would force the ring on my boyfriend, you're forever my slave i would say hehehe...
Ehem, back to the review... I think it's very cute, I just hope they don't have romantic issues like people getting between them =_= or the parents being too shitty. Things like that. But hey, this is you story, I'll go with it as long as it stays HiruSena.

More beef jerky!!! (!?)

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