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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so utterly adorable and yet so tragic. I love L so much. Light is such a bitch when he's Kira. You did a great job capturing that, this was a really well written fic, the lemon was nice too ^_~
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man this was wonderful; you really have the workings to make doujinshi x.x;;;
ah this is so exact that heck...it could be part of the underscenes >_>;; maybe they did have SMEX and L is raito-kun's only love?! He was playing all those other women!!
*cough* don't mind me...too late ^^; still great job and I hope you make more
ah this is so exact that heck...it could be part of the underscenes >_>;; maybe they did have SMEX and L is raito-kun's only love?! He was playing all those other women!!
*cough* don't mind me...too late ^^; still great job and I hope you make more
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic was amazing. I was hanging on every word. I also think you brought the characters personalities very well. I hope to read more of your writing.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love L and Raito.
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wow this is a one shot thing right? nice one. ^-^
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wow this is a one shot thing right? nice one. ^-^
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes..yummy lemon. I would have enjoyed it if it were for good intentions. But nooo, Raito only did it so he can seduce L into a false friendship just so he can create a utopia? Give me a break. Even I know that, that isn't obtainable no matter how much bad people he rid. -_-;
I liked how you wrote the small conversations between those two. Trying to cover the suspicions with normal talk. I'm surprised that L fell for it though. poor guy T.T Raito..xT -sigh- I'm not surprised that he would be thinking that but during intercourse? Sheesh..How can he not turn after seeing a writhing, cute, L? xD
Great job on this story! ^_^ update more yah?
I liked how you wrote the small conversations between those two. Trying to cover the suspicions with normal talk. I'm surprised that L fell for it though. poor guy T.T Raito..xT -sigh- I'm not surprised that he would be thinking that but during intercourse? Sheesh..How can he not turn after seeing a writhing, cute, L? xD
Great job on this story! ^_^ update more yah?
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very HOT! I like your writing style...but i just can't see Raito being so cold even after the love making. I was hoping he would change his mind and be all lovey-dovey with L... okay so maybe that's not gonna happen.
great story. write more Raito/L pwease?
great story. write more Raito/L pwease?
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo...I gotta know what happens next!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful.
Written well in character, with delightful description, and just damn sexy.
I was wishing Light would give in and fall fer L, but I'm only Dreamin', yeah? ~__^ Yer end was by the more realistic. And beautiful, nonetheless.
<3
Written well in character, with delightful description, and just damn sexy.
I was wishing Light would give in and fall fer L, but I'm only Dreamin', yeah? ~__^ Yer end was by the more realistic. And beautiful, nonetheless.
<3
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. WAY awesome lemon, for sure. I read this on ff.net, but I came here to read it also, in case you censored anything on the ff.net version.
Much fun. Great story. Keep writing DN fics! :)
Much fun. Great story. Keep writing DN fics! :)