rate_review Reviews

Lovely story so far. No worries about there not being an actual lemon in chapter five, it still came out beautifully. Loved that last line. Looking forward to more!

I'm only going to review on AFFN for this chapter because FFN won't let me review for some odd reason. (It hates me...) Shnoogie normally is a good thing. (It is what I call me cat ^.^) But in last chapter's case it is like OH MAN SOMETHING IS UP! But other wise I consider it a good thing. ^.~ No worries. I can't wait to hear or read the story of Sobei and Semei. Ritsuka needs to take Sobei from Semei and give his brother a good wuppin'. Up date soon. Huggles
Nikkler

You've got to be joking me. I hate cliffhangers. Whoever invented them should die a terirble terrible death. *sobs* Now, I'm gonna be all impatient as to find out what you'll be making Seimei like! Great story so far!

Hello. Yay another chapter. O.o Semei is back Oh shnoggie (I know dumb word. I you can call it a word. ^.~) I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Looking forward to the next update. huggles
Nikkler

Good start, looking promising. I sense angst, poor Ritsuka *huggles*

Hey, it's really good. You misspelled a few things, though, but nothing major.

Hello. I was browsing through and saw this fic. ^.^ I love it so far. Yeah I'm sure other people will have the Return of Beloved but YOU were the first, and that makes it more unique and wonderful. Can't wait for the next update. Huggles
Nikkler

Sound very promising and surely interesting. The lack of well written and long Loveless fics is big so I engourage you to continue. the start was very good.