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aww man! i wanted more, soemthing else, a kiss at least....

really you did a good job, please tell me this isn't the end. what happens later? at the temple...?

Hey, this is looking pretty good. It's about 1AM where I am right now, so I'm in no condition to be coherent, but really, I did like this. The whole crying in Doumeki's arms thing was really sweet and I'm curious as to why Watanuki's day was so troublesome. He's not usually so clumsy. (Could it be that there's an AFF fic with actual plot? No, no. I tease. If it's just a way for Watanuki and Doumeki to get in each other's pants, I'm perfectly fine with that too. :P)

Anyway, yeah. Looking forward to more, so I'll drop by every now and then and see what's what. Do you happen to have a livejournal.com account? There's a doumekixwatanuki community that would be interested in this, so if you wanted, you could also post it there to get more reviews/critiques/etc. Or, I could just rec it or something if you wanted. Ciao.

~Sarisia

Loved it! So in character ^___^ Continue,please! It would be lovely!

AWESOME!! That's all I can say about it, except, are you going to write another chapter of it? You better, this was awesome, and I can't wait to find out where this is going!! ^_^

So far I like the flavor of this one. I only hope you are going somewhere with this! Please continue!