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LOL, more than 3... look at how many hits you got....
Let's boost that confidence a little.
Great job on the story. It is articulate and expressive, while holding true not only to the original characters but to the original canon as well, that is not easy to do, and you do it remarkably well. Update as soon as you can, I'm looking forward to the rest, and am glad you decided to carry on with the story. Hopefully, when this story is over, you have more ideas in the works, I'd love to read what you come you with.

oh oh oh oh! so mean! ^^

i need more of this.. i love petshop of horrors and.. purr

this is getting very hot!

I love your story and i'm sure others do as well and i can not waite for the next peice and please do not leave for so long next time.

:D please write more.

Wow, I am enjoying this. You must get to the smut ^_^

Love the story please update real soon can not wait to read what happens next

Next chaper please. Now!!!!

Great story so far! The plot moves along nicely and it's very well written. I hope we find out why this is on Adultfanfiction.net next chapter!

I like the story and how you've been handling it, but I have to make some comments about the tea. First off, hibiscus is one of the most common, botanical, basic teas on the market today. Almost any botanical or citrus tea you pick up with have hibiscus as the main ingrediant. It's know for it's floral dimensions that are also coupled with regular black tea flavors. The plant itself is grown throughout the United States because it can survive in almost any condition. Jasmine, on the other hand, is a bit more rare. If you find jasmine tea in a market, odds are that it has been diluted by some green tea. The only way to get straight jasmine tea in the United States is to make your own or go to an oriental market. Jasmine (and almost any other flower) is an aphrodisiac, with some slight calming effects, but it would take about 20 cups before you truly felt something. The most this combination would do is relax him and clear his head a bit, although it does sound like it would taste good. I know you were probably just trying to put in some detail, but every once in a while somebody like me who studies herbs for whatever reason will come around and correct you, so be more careful next time.

Nice fic. I usually like more action... ;b But it was a nice change. Intropsection is good too. You have a few typos/spelling errors(ex, I think you spelled "exhausted" eshausted), and you said constellation when I think you meant consolation, but overall good in the grammar department too. An entertaining read- I laughed when D was trying to figure out what to wear. Thanks. =]