rate_review Reviews

I am rather enjoying this story and I don't find it slow or boring at all. It seems rather sweet, tender, and more importantly, REAL. I actually prefer stories with plot over PWP's and if/when Leon and D finally do have sex, it'll mean more than some quick smut fic.

it was good but..........it needs more chapters!

Hi!

I don't think this story is slow, I like the pace. The PWP fics are not bad, but they tend to be always the same. It's the background that makes a story different and I like the one you're giving to this. The characters are faithful to the manga and the thoughts of both are really credible, understandable and close to what normal people would think and do, and I like that in a fic, that it feels real. So yes, I wouldn't mind reading more chapters of this, not only the smut. If you have some other idea and want to develop it I will be thrilled to read a long story.

Keep going keep drawing it out, make it a hell of a story if you can. You are doing a pretty good job so far. I love drawn out stuff and besides once you establish the story and get the smut going smut can be added into chapters without any real build up. I don't much care to read smut when it's slapped together before the establishing of the relationship. So I think you are doing a wonderful job.

I think you should definitely continue it after the smutfest... make it a real story. ^_^ I like where it's going. Long, drawn-out angst-fess please me no end... Will this be so? Here's hoping!

This is a fascinating story- I think you should let it run until it wants to end. ^_^

I love this. It's wonderfully writtenand even if you haven't written for a while and are using all the "No-no's" of grammar, don't feel bad. Real writers break those rules allt eh time!

And and But your heart out and I love contractions!

I definately want to see more and I usually never review the first time I start reading a new fandom. YOu've got something nice here!