rate_review Reviews

That was cool. I thought It was really sweet. It hit me right... *Taps chest, ant suddenly remembers, tha I have no heart* Well the point it that it kicked ass. My only advise is, you should use Quotation marks, it'd just make it easer on les readers. Also with the song, (Which kicked as by the way, did you write it?) Prehaps putting it in verse form whould make it songier.... but it's only my oppinion, anyway keep it up! You rule! Y'know this might sound lame, but it'd be pretty cool if an older girl confessed her love for me. >_<

Oh, and by the way, I was just joking, I know that you didn't write that song.... >_<