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for Vision of the future

by pandorazellas

person Yit-Ha
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute!!!!! They're adorablem really. Congrats on a good ending! It doesn't matter if it's cheesy or not, as long as there's smut!
person sugarangel
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww a happy ending at last! Yay for droolworthy lemon sceans. Keep up the good work. I love happy endings. ^__^
person Tohru_Readman
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, well done, can't wait to read the rest.

*sits and waits for more story while eatting a cookie*
person TokyoLover9
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Happiness and joy overwelms me! You're such an awesome writer! ^__^ hee... K blackmailed Hiro... ^__^
person Travellyr
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*LAUGHTER* OH MY GOSH, I love K. "Shuichi! Take the rest of the day off to screw your boyfriend, 'cause it's gonna be the last time this week you'll have the chance!"

^_^ Very nice.
person Yukishuii
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok i SOOO did nto read the 5th chap and when i read te ending.. I laughed ma ass off HAHAHH XD lol love the last ctach lines!!
person Paine77
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is for the last two chapters ^0^

Chapter 5 was so great. I loved how K just dragged Sakano's ass to his office. Kudos K! And this line makes me almost pee myself laughing You can all take the rest of the day off. Why don’t you go home and screw Yuki-san a few times, its probably going to be the last fuck your going to get for at least a week

Chapter 6: Aww hun I'm glad I was a help ^^ Me and my smut scenes ^^;; Well this was sooo cute and sweet. *cries and sniffs* I lubs this story so much. I love you too hun *Huggies and smoochies* I hope you make more stories one day ^^ Cheers for Sakano and K!

person Yukishuii
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was another fantastoc chpter! both chap 3 and 4.

Mmmm... i still like lichael tho Sakano's all stressed out? Poor babee >< Anyways :P K's a sweetie *huggies K* keep on going and keep it sweet. I;d hate anymore sad stuff whee XD
person the soul
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that was better much happier I love it thank-you...would love to read the rest....
person Travellyr
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* Awwwww. That was so sweet! And my advice to Sakano is _get used to it!_ If you want to date someone with kids, you're going to have to be a lot less uptight about getting interupted BY kids! XD

*giggling* Poor, neurotic Sakano. He's so abused... but his number one enemy is himself. Thanks for the update, and I look forward to the next chapter. :D

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