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for Vision of the future

by pandorazellas

person Shootingstar99
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sakano and K T_T Still awesome hun. I'm really loving this story so far. I loved the phone bit super funny ^^

*huggies and smoochies*
person sugarangel
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why did u spoil everythig u evil evil person u?!!!! EVIL jk. PLease update soon or u shall perish by death of flying monkeys! BWAHAHAHAHA!
person Travellyr
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heeee! Michael's such a sweetie. ^^ So is K.
*giggles* Sakano's going to die when he realizes that Michael already knows... but it'll be a good death. ^_______^
person Travellyr
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Poor, neurotic Sakano. In the comics I sometimes feel sorry for him... and I almost always want to sit him down somewhere quiet with a cup of doctored tea. ^^;

I like your writing enough to want to know how the story ends, so I'll be looking forward to more of this. That dream of his seemed in character for him... poor guy, always obsessing over how anything and everything can go wrong. Of course, in his waking world, it usually _does_...
person yukishuii
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely one zelly darlenn ^^
First off,. Michael's young but oh so sharp :)
And you made K..... HUMAN :P i mean... u know :P feelings... not some cyborg who randomly shoots ppl 0_o

keep on going ^^
person the soul
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is good story please keep going it has a lot of potential....please keep going..
person Paine77
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww I like K in this chapter ^____^

I thought the cheese and pickle sandwich was SUPER funny. Keep up the great work hun. I can't wait to see how this turns out!

Michael is so smart I just want to huggle him.

*camps out awaiting your next chappie*
person jade
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! i thought it would be a one shot and that poor sakano would be alone! T_T no one love him, but i do!...and apparently K hehehe
daddy sakano. seriously i love him, and this story's awesome so far, please continue
person sugarangel
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay you did anorther chapter. Second daddy it sounds so sweet. Please contuinue this. Please with choclate on top. ^_^
person Paine77
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for no more writer's block! And Yay for Sakano and K! And Yay that I finally get to review your story! *dances*

This was so sad hun, I really felt my heart breaking. Gosh what a terrible dream. But you wrote this so well, I really loved it ^___^

Don't worry this K won't leave his Sakano-san *Huggies and sloppy kisses*

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