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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was really good. I wish your chapters were longer but I can handle it if you updated regularly but I understand if you getbehind. The grammer was bad. 2 hints on that. thrilled is T-H-R-I-L-L-E-D, not T-R-I-L-L-E-D. ok, & one thing that kept bugging me is you spelled FELT felled. I do believe felled isn\'t a word lol. it\'s Felt. So Sorry. Gomen Nasia. This is not a flame, it\'s coonstructive critism, sorry if you dont like that. next time I\'ll just bite my tongue. ;p anyways, PLZ UPDATE SOON!!! ^_^; P.S. is there any requirements to being a beta? \'cuz I wouldn\'t mind.
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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, I\'m reviewing again to say I\'m REALLY immensely sorry. GOMEN NASAI!!! I was giving you lessons on speeling when I spelled my name wrong! In the name box I wrote Aneglica and my name is Angelica. oh, that was a typo but I still feel so embarassed!!!! GOMEN NASAI!!!
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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me again..... I\'m SOOOOOO SSORRY!!!!!! i bet I\'ve already made a fool of myself. I didnt read the part where it said you are Dutch and Dyslexic. AAAAAAAAGHGH!!! I\'m SOOOOOOOO SORRRY! oh, please forgive me. Gomen nasai!!!! ^_^; I just thought you were a bad speller. I have so many dyslexic friends that would probably try to kill right now and tell me to shut up and let it drop while I still have the chance. So I will be probably doing you a favor, and I\'ll shut up now. I\'ll never talk again if you don\'t want me to. Again, sorry. (I wonder if Meagan was trying to make a point when she said I really did act the part of my year. Can you guess which year I am? ^_^; )
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Plz write more! I so happy and laughing that the fact yuki and kyo is going to be in 'the' most romatic play in history! I lyv kyoXyuki pairing!! ^O^ write more from a big fan! ^_^
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet so far and you've kept Kyo in charecter. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(giggles maniacly) i like that last part!! funny stuff! XD well i hope u update soon and pleez don't email me cuz my parents will proly be able to read the email. (evil parent control junk! T_T) i think its kool that your dutch and dislexic but u still write fics! u must really like writing! i like exlamation marks!!! yay well as i said before update soon!!!!! @_@ luv ya!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice follow up!
But I want more! Much more!!
But I want more! Much more!!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There is a good deal of spelling errors but that aside i do like the set-up. i wish i couls picture the look on their faces.. ^-^
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked when you decided to put Yuki as Juliet (tough it would have been VERY interesting (in my wicked way, of course) if Kyo was the one selected for this role)
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BIG CHEESY GRIN!! That was a great start!