rate_review Reviews

pretty good D

OMFG!!! THAT HAS GOT TO THE BEST LEMON EVER FREAKIN' MADE!!!!!

Dude, this fic was alright... but back when you were fifteen, you needed to have your head examined. Now you REALLY need to have it examined but..... I figure, at this point, its already WAY too late for you. Anyway, back to the review. Too bad you hadnt met me sooner, this fic could have become alot better with a Beta-Reader. The lemon was.... So-so, not bad, 'specially not when it's one of your first. The rest of the fic was pretty good as well. Take one thing in mind though, your hyper-active IRL, calm it down a bit when you write, dont rush so much. Lol. Im done.... *POOFS.*

Okay here goes...That was way to rushed and overly sappy...It was was stupid in many ways and the sex scene was a peice of shit but it being wrote when youre 15 that I am willing to overlook.It had a interesting plot if not poorly written.Now you asked for me not to go easy on you.

Well, I think that you should create a sequel where this continues, instead of doing something llike this with Rika instead of Renamon.

Interesting, good detail.... I don't know why but for the first part I was laughing my ass off... "Kinda masturbating"... that was classic! I think it was a good paring, Renamon is Frickin hot....

Ohhhh! That's a bloody good fic! I would most likely like to see the sequel! X3

Please make the sequal to this! I beg you! I love the Takato/Renamon pairing!

I thought it was very good I don't see many Renamon and Takato pairings and a sequel would be good

Thanks for the nice review. I do have the original sequel to this fic somewhere around my apartment. It's actually a Takato/Rika pairing though. This fic was supposed to be the first of a three-part series. The final chapter will be a Takato/Rika/Renamon threesome! It may take some time, but I'll get the other two parts up, eventually. But thanks again, and btw: you may be interested in checking out the other fics I have posted here. Happy reading y'all!