rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

i lovethe MR chiba part lol
some of the writing did not flow well but i still liked it

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

where do you come with this, it's so hot yet really wrong too! i think you should keep it as a one-shot, to me it just better of that way.

That was a really good story... hoot details...... i mean wow...... and the ending i really like.. it was funny yet extremely ironic.... nice job

This was great!!! I´d love to see a sequel too!!!


REally nice and hot story!!!

i think this is so freakin hot, but one thing when you wrote than mamoru saw his workers working outside, then they must saw what happen inside, and hearing what happen too right???

but even though u made alot of mistake, i think this is still hot.

is this your first lemon? IF so not bad at all, was very good, and doable. LOL, and for a person who finds lemon "distateful" you did a good job it was sleazy but possible and decent.

Only thing, if he can see the people working from his desk then they would have heard all that conmotion, I thought it would have been a nice touch for them to get done and the office to be watching, also you said he ripped her shirt sending buttons flying.....then at the end they get dressed and everything is okay, So work on making things consistent, but it was a good read!

well i liked it . . . who doesn't like office nookie!
til next time . . .
later

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel or something please?