rate_review Reviews

Wow---o! That was hot. I love it when the ukes crossdress so that they could get their semes to fuck them!! This was a great story. I'm waiting for the next chapter or sumthing. Not a lot of people write stories for Eyeshield21. I suppose it's not as popular. But the couple Hiruma and Sena is just sooo perfect and hot! I don't like the MamoriXHiruma couple. This story just proves how right the SenaXHiruma coupling is!!! Good luck with future writing!!!

I read the watered-down version on fanfiction.net and after spending two monthes trying to find the lemon, finally came upon this. The following is all I now or ever will have to say on the subject: If there was a goddess of wrting HirumaxSena fanfiction, you would be it. I bow down to you. *Bows, lights scented candles*

I love hiruma/sena pairings! I can't really imagine sena in that sexy secretary outfit.I liked the part when hiruma finds a note about not opening before Xmas and fucked sena after that.^ ^

I'm just wondering, Why did Sena taste like peppermint? What did he go through earlier? Could you write a side story for that. I'd love to know.

Yow!!... I need to take a shower now... a very Cold shower. Love it!!

YYYAAAHAAA!!
-glomps enthusiastically and huggles near to death-
ano ano ano ano that was really really sezzy and well-written ;-;!
Im so glad that you added even just one more fic to this section. I am highly appreciating the little tidbits of translated doujinshi that you sent me-wipes drool from corner of mouth and clears throat quickly-yesyes, i enjoy them very much so!^^;;
Lemon chapter eeeee...prettiful!