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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this
story
had
hot parts
was well written
but didn't
make me come...
nice try though...
story
had
hot parts
was well written
but didn't
make me come...
nice try though...
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a well written and in depth rape story, but I have one question. Wasn't Midvalley gay? He seemed to like Meryl's stuff too much for a gay man. Or maybe I'm confusing him and the sax player in Cowboy Bebop...anyway good story.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sick, twisted and disturbing. And I liked it that way.
I must say the use of Legato was definately interesting. :D
~teardropdangel~
I must say the use of Legato was definately interesting. :D
~teardropdangel~
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT and really well-written. Hope you write more...chapter 2 maybe?
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FUN FOR THE WHOLE FAMILY indeed! Granted, rape is not everyone’s cuppa tea, but for the rape enthusiast this fanfic is a slice of heaven!
Evilmouse never fails to please with high quality, intelligently written smut. The characters are finely crafted and little details create a rich texture despite the brevity of the story. In particular, Elendira’s introduction was an elegant foreshadowing of her true nature, and Meryl seeing her reflection in Hoppered’s armor while being plowed by Midvalley was brilliant. There’s even room for a refreshing touch of humor (“I know, I’ve got great recovery time”.) Somehow Evilmouse just knows which buttons to push to get me twitching! The bad guys are gratifyingly nasty and Meryl’s defilement exquisite. Face it the little priss had it coming! I can’t wait for the rest of the gung ho gang to get in on this. More DP’s please!!!
Evilmouse never fails to please with high quality, intelligently written smut. The characters are finely crafted and little details create a rich texture despite the brevity of the story. In particular, Elendira’s introduction was an elegant foreshadowing of her true nature, and Meryl seeing her reflection in Hoppered’s armor while being plowed by Midvalley was brilliant. There’s even room for a refreshing touch of humor (“I know, I’ve got great recovery time”.) Somehow Evilmouse just knows which buttons to push to get me twitching! The bad guys are gratifyingly nasty and Meryl’s defilement exquisite. Face it the little priss had it coming! I can’t wait for the rest of the gung ho gang to get in on this. More DP’s please!!!