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!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!

WOW!! This is so good so far!! I hope you\'re still writing on it!! I can\'t wait for more!! YAY!! Thanks for making my week ^_~

i love this!
the drama and angst are beautifully written !
U BETTER UP-DATE !!!!!
SOON TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
pweety please?
if u dobt ill cry T_T

Ahhhhh! that chapter was super sweet! Chapter two wa s a wee bit on the creepy side, but hey points for originality! I assume you were going by the manga version of the Goddess. Anywho's super cool story. Update sooon!

That was Awesome! It's not often that you read good Mpreg. You HAVE got to continue this! Please updste soon!

I have read fan fics that have had everyone pregers but the dog and I didn't believe it . This is the most believable idea I have seen . Good for you. Looking forward to the rest of the story. *giggles*

If a reader doesn't know what BP means, and reads anyway, then it's really at their own risk, I suppose, but I just wanted to comment on the fact that since this fic is heavy on the descriptive details, you may want to consider adding a clearer warning to the description, such as "self-harm", or "cutting". I myself was feeling the beginnings of a trigger effect while reading, and the thought of breaking out the razor blades was starting to feel very enticing. Sorry if I sound like I'm nagging. Personally, I don't mind, and I actually think your description of the scene was very good and realistic, emphasizing the feel-good, physical effects rather than making it into a self-pity party, with all the typical "oh my god I must shed blood instead of tears" jazz. I enjoyed it because of that fact.

Okay, you've got my attention too. I didn't read this and didn't read this and kept trying to figure out what "BP" meant, and finally read the fanfic JUST TO SEE WHAT A "BP" WARNING WAS, and you caught me. ._.

You caught me, and I still don't know what BP is, besides British Petroleum.
...and I'd be shocked and amused if that turned up in this fanfic. ^^;

oh thats a horrible place to leave it. Update please! I like this so far! Can't wait to read more either, I'll be waiting.

~IceAngel~

Good start... you have my attentiion,,,, now what happens next? Get to writinng!