rate_review Reviews

Couple of grammatical errors with verb tenses, and granted not much plot, there is a nice little back story so as to give the story something to it. Didn't really notice any spelling errors. Why? Well, wasn't looking for them, given that for once, I actually found a well written, consice pokémon story that didn't have people having sex with pokémon, or the same tired out fics of the usual trainers.

Original characters, with depth to them, and not just some fantasy of seeing two of the series main chars going at it wildly.

Thank you. Sincerly, tahnk you for writting something good and restoring my faith in pokémon fan fiction.