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AUGHHHHH as much as i love plot, this teasing HAS to stop. you have a nice way of writing intimate scenes, and i want moooreeeeee :D

MORE WOMAN, GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!! I ***NEEEEEDS*** IT!!!!!!!!!!

Please, please, please keep going and update soon - I really like this fic, even though you tease us entirely too much. Shy, innocent Vash and experienced, but controlled Wolfwood is yummy! Can't wait for more!

(By the way, the only reason I'm just now reviewing is 'cause I just now read the fic - the whole thing in the past half hour or so.)

Please continue this story. It is excellently written.

Helllll Yesss! This fic has such a delicious angst factor! Can't wait until Vash finally opens up to Wolfwood and gains acceptance from him. Just drive me straight to the finish line!

A story's gotta be great when it leaves you wishing unwritten chapters would come out a certain way. ...I'm visualizing the girls getting an eyefull; Milly being a supportive friend; Maryl shunning Vash and running back to the insurance agency like the skanky hoe she is; Knives and his cronies shrivel up; and Vash and Wolfwood live happily ever after.

Moooore chapters Pleeeeeeze!!

Agh! Gomen nasai for not reviewing last chapter, but my comp crashed on me for a while. Thank you for the hot yaoiness once more Hella-chan! Very nice! I likes. X3 And I'm glad I could give you that suggestion, I just thought it would be the funniest thing. Well keep this goin cause I'm a likin. Many donuts and love and peace to you.

-Vash

Another great chapter. The "lock and laugh" at the end was a hoot. I can just image the look on Nick's face at that...

You update like lightning! I love you! (a thousand hugs) Again, great chapter - with plot beginning! I feel for poor Nicky. Still having to take care of himself *wink wink* and now Legato's giving him problems... Tsk, tsk. Then again, what fun would it be if they didn't have to work for their lovin'? *giggle* I'm evil. Keep going! You're doing great!

Hell, this story is al I live for at the moment, too. Especially in this moment because I'm home nursing a stupid cold that I've managed to delay until now. Quite a feat, since people just had to sneeze in my presence and I would get sick too. Seems that I've gotten slightly more immune to germs...
Hmm, now that you mentioned it, those secret opening is Vash's suits has its... logical explanations, though I don't think he had intended them to be used quite that way. *giggles*
Poor Wolfwood. And I can also relate to the pain he got there in the bathroom. Headaches are not to be messed with... *rubs temples* I hate being sick, I hate being sick, I HATE BEING SICK!
Ok, I won't mention THAT again.
Loved this chapter, and 30 chapters you say? I think I love you!

Hugs, Z

Hummina hummina hummina! This is seeexy! Oh so pretty teasing itsy bitsy small steps and poooor tormented Wolfwood! aaaw! And bad Legato! He needs some punishment, but after reading the manga I don't know if I should hate him or not...He's evil towards Wolfwood! That makes him bad. Check.

Anyways, another amazing chapter by an amazing author! I so love this fic, please just let it go on! I love being teased, but I hate to be, so that's a contradiction, yes...but I will so follow this fic, dear, it is the best one I've ever read because it's unique! I check this site every day to see if you've updated and I go off like a bloody rocket when you have!

*Worships your fingertips*