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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story =D
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its too cute! i adore it!!!!! i think they make the cuuutest couple and i'm so glad somebody wrote a fic about em!
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good! I like it! Um! But! Too many exclamations!
It's sorta beats the point of an exclamation mark if there are too many, put one every few sentences-not every two. :) Other then that, pretty good!
It's sorta beats the point of an exclamation mark if there are too many, put one every few sentences-not every two. :) Other then that, pretty good!