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OMG!!! that is sooo cute but come on I want to see or rather read some steaming hot sexy scenes lol. Hey dont look at me like that lol.

YAY!! chappies!!sooo cute!!!must read more....*drools* hehheh....

dude, did you notice that your rambling and AN takes like the half of the fic? are we reading a fic or your notice? Im not flaming this fic, no worries, but Im honestly kind fed up seeing that your chapters are actually so sho~~~~~~~~~~rt. I suggest you just take your time writing on chap and make it longer, man, thatd be really better. you dont have to listen to me, woot, you probably wont, but I like this fic a lot but honestly...kill me for noticing petty details like that but hell, Id much rather prefer to wait a week or two longer and getting a longer chap instead of getting a chap where half of it is AN and only the rest is the actual chapter =(

Awe...me want more. It's sweet so far^^

YaY! You updated!

Argh, I'm also a Zoro/Sanji fan, so I'm almosted tempted to turn around my advice and have Sanji compete with Luffy for Zoro's affections. But that wouldn't work because Zoro is totally dedicated to Luffy.

*jawn* god.. live is boring.. *glances over at computer* O GOD!!!! A chapter!!!!! thank you!
hehe.. you agreed to my deal ? fine.. here is a review.. *points at review*.. i like this story.. and i'm looking forward to sanji's introduction.. *grins*
keep it up!!

Yay! New chappie *dances*

I'm really enjoying this fic ^3^All the details makes me hapoy |3

Can't wait to see more (and Sanji as a rival YAY! *0*)

*sweat drops* k it's cute. Realy. But do you think you could make the chapters just a little longer? I know you probably don't want the story to go to fast, but if you don't write more into your chapters you won't go anywhere at all. other than the shortness, the only other complaint i have is the lack of action. *grinns* but that's just my perverted fan girl side talking. All in all, I love it to death. (this is the first one peice fic I've ever read and I think this is becomeing my favorite pairing.....I realy do like it a lot.^_^) Please update soon. This reveiw was also writen so that your head won't explode. I have seen that happen before, and you're right, it is not pretty. *straight face* I have a mop and some simple green if you need it though. Update soon, i await your next chapter eagerly (oh, and though i'm not one to talk, your grammar needs work. *laughs* So does mine though, so you can ignore me, I'm rambling now. Sorry)

Yosh! First of all, Just wanted to say that this wasn't bad and has alot of potiential. You keep the story in first person pretty well. I think the only thing that comes off as a hinderance, is at times it seems that Zoro talks in circles. For instance the repetion of his admirationfor Luffy. It is important to mention, just not every other sentence. Good luck!

Great Story! I love this pairing and think that there should be much much more of it! Please update again soon(Or I'll die waiting for it)