rate_review Reviews

yay ^_^ I like updates! though the chapters are a bit short.. but still great, don't worry!
Is it a ZoLu.. I like that better because LuZo seems .. weird in a way.. @_@
anyway.. I get the update, you get the review! nice deal right? *blows kisses*

hooray! Zoro's forgiven!

(struggles to remember the next Zoro/Luffy point in the serires) I've been reading ahead in the manga (is currently on ch 250-something), so it's hard to remember something from so long ago. oo! I do remember when they were on the Baratie (or w/e it's called) and Luffy stuck a booger in Zoro's drink! heyyy, you could have that scene only with Zoro sizing Sanji up as a potential rival before he starts going all gaga over Nami! And then! And then! When he loses his fight to Hawkeye and Luffy nearly goes berserk, you can have Zoro go on this mental tirade about not being strong enough for his captain before he shouts out that promise he made to Luffy! YaY!

My 20/20 vision won't let me hit my Luffy or my Zoro!!! *cleans her thick glasses*

Hehehe, I just want Sanji to appear, so we can have some sanlu thrown in the mix!!! (not zosan or sanzo, AGK)

Are you going to ignore captain Kuro? I don't think it's necessary to mention the enemies, unless of course some of Zoro's feelings are depicted on the fights.

I'll review until I died :D Still Yukiko only this time log on ^^

how about for the next chapter, u do the scene where Luffy fell off a cliff and the crew doesn''t know where he is and zoro goes all cray looking for him? then have lots of smut from zoro. because he is relieved luffy is safe. ^_~ sorry, just wanted to cram some smut in ther XP can ya blame me. :D

Ha, ha, ha, I really like your fic so far!! It's simultaneously cute and funny, and I can't get enough of it!! You also write from Zoro's POV very well; I can totally picture him thinking those kinds of things ^__^ Keep up the great work!!

UPDATE YAY!!! (I'll keep looking for this fic no matter what *0*!!!)

I love it! Zoro is forgiven nyaw! (I wonder If he would get jealous of Sanji too... xD sorry i just love that trio)

And well, to be honest I prefer ZoroxLuffy (dunno why, I just got a thin for it lol)

Oooh, and you have a lj account? what's your user name? mine es nuriko_sakuma (somebody already has noriko with 'o' T^T)

anyways, keep writing!! *takes out a whip* º.º... xD no honest, take your time =3 I'll be waiting for actualization all the time ^^

Heaven: YOSH!! Huzzah for ZoroxLuffy fluff!! *bows down to you* you made my day ^^
Hell: even better *evil grin* some ZoroxLuffy action >) There's just not enough
ZxL out there, ya know?
Heaven: *sigh* Yesh. I tuned out any One Piece fanfic for a while because of the lack
of any -real- good fanfics that caught my intrest. and then
today I thought I would check and see if there was any-
Hell: Damn good fiction finally. I guess -WE- *glares at heaven* came on the
right day 'cause we found your fic. And I -do- say that it is devilishly good *grin*
Heaven: Keep it up or I'll sick Hell on you! ^_~
Hell: grrrrrr....
Heaven: *is thinking about the ZxL kiss in last chap* SQUEEEEE!!!!.....Ya know
I can't stop wondering if Luffy isn't as 'air-headed' as he leads us to believe. *wink*
Hell: oohhhh......hmmm......Anywho, love it and can't wait to see more!

Hm you've got a good thing here! Great first person voice, great tension and I like how you don't bother with the regular narrative of where they're going or what's happening. Zoro's voice just puts you there.

Well done.

please can you continue and be my pimp for zolu ficcie ?