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for My Captain

by YaoiMuffin

person ozyaoi
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
G'Day there read the fic and loved it esp now it is getting more and more interesting (damn Nami and her bad timing) Hope you keep at it.....ozyaoi
person DemonicMorgana
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I say you deserve more reviews for this. :3 Its really good! I hope you update soon!!!! :3
person NorikoSakuma
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Updates makes me all warm and fuzzy inside -w-

I LOVE IT!! *0* So CUTE!! and the kiss was omg cute TwT

And btw, my history is only 1 chapter sorry ^^Uu

BTW, do you have a livejournal account? I'm submitting there all my doujinshis stash scans! I bet you'll love them x3
person Kuragari Okami
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooo....good fic....write some more pweeeese!>^.^<....Luffy ish soo cute!!
person crazyb1tch85
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 5:

WTF??? you left them with just a kiss?!?!?! *targets Nami with weapons of mass destruction* Now this is wronggggg~~~~!!!!! =_O. I just hope this leaves to good smutt XD (don't mind me, I need my fix of daily yaoi)
person Senera San
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! once again, I forgot to review! *slaps herself*
but you did updated again! I lurve yah! You update so soon and Zoro and Luffy shared a very special moment ^_~
*smiles* I'll be waiting for you!
person Reyn
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww! This one was so cute!! The best one yet in my opinion. And not jest because of the kiss either. I really liked how because of Luffy, Zoro was able to suddenly see the beauty in everything around him. Awesome job!

But yes, I do think you update often. Prolly because most of the stories I like are those epic ones where the author's don't update for more than a month...

I should write at least a One Piece oneshot! Problem is, all my ideas lately are more AU...oh well. I'll think of something!
person Noriko Sakuma
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH! You evil! x3

I want more of this fluffyness!! *.* Is just so cute!!
person Reyn
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! Another update! I really am enjoying this. Good One Piece fics that are constantly updated are so rare and hard to come by...(makes me want to write one of my own)

You gotta love the way Luffy is proud too admit that he's a pirate. Even if it does get them all chased out of town.
person NOIP
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...

I like it.

Quite a bit.

Spiffy job!

~ NOIP

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