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NOOOOOO!!!!! I forgot to review!!! *sobs* don't be sad!!! I'm here!! *winks*
This is to good!! Zoro blushing? Zoro almost kissing luffy?!!!!! *dies*
You made my day XD

This is very, very nice, and cute, too. Please keep writing this, there's so many good fics that are left half-way and never continued. And besides, Zoro x Luffy is such a good pairing ^^

I like how you're taking it slow. It helps all these little snippets seem more canon while following the timeline. It things were rushed, the quality of this would jest go down. So yes, gradually build it up!

muffins and pudding? I'll take a raincheck for that. (is so full right now it feels like I'm gonna explode)

Hooray! an update. To be honest, it felt a bit too much like the first chapter, but who am I to complain, ne? Maybe it was the ranting going on in Zolo's head about lack of food and preperations, but that's to be expected considering the circumstances ^_^

No for real, Is very good

^_^ Only Zoro can be *almost* kissing Luffy and then still defending his sexuality xD Is so Zoro Like jojojo

anyway, you didn'tn told me if is going to be Luffyx Zoro on taht order, pease pretty please??

I'm loving this so far, honestly is SO CUTE! x3 *kisses and huggles*

Aww cute!!

I'm really liking the way you're putting Zoro's POV T^T!!!

Is so perfect!! I wanna read more nyaw!! x3

So sweet! I can't wait to read more! mabey zoro could feel slightly more for his captain in the next chapter
*hugs a pic of zoro * so cute!!!!!

YaY!!! Luffy/Zolo is my favorite!! I think you should sort of go in order with the series and find another moment with them to write about and sort of turn this into a collection of oneshots about them ^_^

chapitre 1:
noooooooo holy shit, this is so cute @_@!!!

I really liked Zoro's point of view, how he decided to join Luffy. One would think he wasn't given other choice, but I also think something nagged him to accept. And what is Zoro's place in the crew anyway? pirate's don't need swordsmen that much. While all the others have some kind of position (except Robin, but before that they were five and everybody had their place.) Zoro doesn't. Makes you want to wonder what happened in the middle. And this is as good as any other place to start imagining it ^^. I'll keep your fic in check, so you better not leave your readers on hiatus *prepares uzi* <--- (i'm crazy don't mind me)

Whoooo, how sweet.
I've recently started reading One Piece, and I like a lot Luffy and Zoro. I think they're kinda cute together also.
As advice, I'll only say, keep them this cute, add some lemon and humor, and you'd have it.