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for Riki's Submission

by DrkDreamer

person Anon
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating chapter. (7) Raoul isn't as bad as I was thinking. And Daryl likes Riki! Cool.

Glad Iason is having some problems, too - adjusting to his own attraction to Riki.

Can't wait to see where you take this.
person ayachan
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh... *dun dun dun!* this is so interesting! keep up the good work!
person ayachan
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh.. this is great! daryl and riki's relationship is.. interesting, lol, but i do hope that they end up liking one another... er.. as friends :P... ohhh, erasing riki's memories? ebil iason *glare* be nice to riki! lol, can't wait for the next chapter!
person Xue-Li
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like this fic. Riki and Iason are nicely done. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person AnonnaDonna
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As usual, my dear, your work is FAR above the norm. I'm really LOVING the complex personal interactions and reactions between the different characters. For example, the way Daryl alternates between feeling sorry for Riki and being really frustrated with him is very "true to life."

Major big-time smoochies and kudos!
person Nautica
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A plot twist! Hmmm...I wonder how Riki would react if he ever found out that Iason played with his memories.

I'm highly anticipating the next chapters!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely facinating story, even if I've never heard of that anime before. Quite well done, as is to be expected based upon the quality of your other work, and very intriguing... I look forward to seeing where you take this. Keep up the good work!
person lusiki
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more please!!!! its agreat story!!!!!!
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI, I have read very few Ai No Kusabi fics that I actually liked, this is one of the best. In searching for good work I wrote my own. I would love some constructive feedback if you have time, would you check out LemonJuice, the story is called "that night" I look forward to more chapters to this story.
person IgnobleBard
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story from the beginning but haven't had time to respond until now. This is some excellent character writing and an intriguing story. I have to admit to being one of those who knew nothing about Ai no Kusabi until reading your fic, but you really bring the characters to life. I look forward to seeing how this tug-of-war between Iason and Riki plays out.

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