rate_review Reviews

I'm LOVING this work! You took great care to keep personalities accurate adn it's not an easy thing teaching Riki how to be a good pet. LOL. But I am definitely enjoying watching the process. i hope you continue with this story!

Another great chapter. I think one of the most appealing things about AnK is Riki's refusal to submit. This is really different from your other works because unlike Skaia and Tayla, Riki is spirited and rebellious.

Okay, I know I'm going to sound horrible for saying this, but I love the torture! So cruel, so delicious...hahaha

Can't wait for the next chapter.

'''“You split me open, you freak. I’m not made of rubber and you have a cock the size of a horse.”''''

***giggle*** I know that it shouldn't be funny, but it IS. I'm glad you are updating this story so quickly 'cause I'm really enjoying it so far. I can tell already that you're going to get me hooked on AnK, the same way you got me hooked on TPB.

I like your portrayal of Riki and Iason. I've mostly been reading Kira's fanfictions so it's nice to see a different interpretation. I especially like the mental domination that Iason tried to inflict by isolating Riki.

Don't be discouraged if you don't get as many reviews for this story. I think that because its fanfiction, readers have to be acquainted with the world of AnK for it to appeal. Nonetheless, I enjoy this story (and your writing) very much!

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I really like it. Can't wait to see more of it!

I just read the first chapter. Ai No Kusabi is one of my favorite anime so I was excited to find that you had written fanfiction.
I love the first chapter so far! (I just wanted to reassure you that I'm reading. I fell behind in everything during Christmas, so that's why there's a delay in reviews). Now I will proceed to read the second chapter!

I'm not really sure why no one has commented. I guess I'll be the first, then.

It's very interesting to see how your portrayal of Iason differs from Micah and Thaddeus, in that he's already been revealed as BOTH cruel and kind from the get go. To me he seems to be kind of similar to "your" Alexander, and I look forward to seeing if the similarity between the two characters continues as the story progresses.

And poor Riki. I think solitary confinement is one of the most effective ways there is to break a person's spirit. Some people even manage to break their OWN spirit by that means.

Love the story so far and hope that you update soon. Riki and the rest of the characters are in character and the plot is new and a worth while read. Find the part with the warm water an interisting tidbit.