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WOW EXCELLENT FIC GREAT ONE!!!!!!!!!!
Keep it up!!! ^_^ haaaaaa

Review is for entire series
This is a great story very much in line with the story line of the dvd (not that I in anyway object to non canon). i truly enjoyed and there is never enough AnK fan fiction to go around. I hope to see more your writing is very good, by the way have you ever seen or considered writing in the Loveless fandom? I am a very bad reader and almost never review, but your story and your writing (in my opinion) needs to be encouraged to flourish and more, more, more...please?

Just one thing I have to say and I can't help it is an uncontrollable pet peeve (forgive me) you might want to watch the words taunt and taut. i.e. 'his taunt stomach' I just can't help but read it as 'his insulting stomach'. I'm sorry, I'm sorry, mea culpa, mea maxima, mean culpa. If you had any idea how many insulting stomachs, thighs, arms, legs, etc. that I have read about... I realize that it was probably a typo, but my evil half made me say it.

First I have to say that I am very glad you decided to continue this story after chapter 11. I think there is endless potential with these two and you are great at capturing them. I love the way you have them slowly realize their feelings, yet still they don't admit them to each other. I thought especially in this chapter it was very sweet what they wanted to say, but remained unsaid and what they actually did say. I even chuckled a couple of times. Iason was also sooo sweet in this chapter and I like him like that!! Anyway, keep up the great work. I hope there are many many more chapters to come!!!!!

Please it can't end!!!! No, I know this is the perfect end to this story and I loved every line of your work!!!! However it is bitter sweet, since you did such a great job with Iason and Riki that I had hoped it would last longer! Your way of capturing their relationship was just great. It was also just the right mixture of anger, fear, submission, attraction and love that it actually seemed still realistically possible for these characters to actually go through this development!!! You should write more!!! If not more AnK then more of something else! Maybe something original!!! I love your writing style and the storyline was very sound with no abrupt turn of weird events etc. like you can often find it. Very, very well done and one of the best AnK fics I have read (and I try to hunt them down!!!!)
Do us all a favour and write more (Please!!)

this is a great stoty!!!!!!

OMFG!!! >< I LOVED IT!!! It was so sweet how Iason protected him!!!! I was like >_< to CUTENESS!!!! Are you going to write anymore stories soon?XD

I wish I\'d been able to read the other chapters - you captured the feel of the characters from the movie so well. I want more. =)

The perfect end for an extremely well-written fanfiction. I loved reading this story from beginning to end, this last chapter summed it all up perfectly. Thank you for posting this story, it\'s inspired me with both the character development and the writing style. In other words, you just rock. Here\'s hoping you write other fanfics for other anime, or even do the world a favor and publish a book someday with original characters, the litterary world would certainly benifit from it!

May i say i read the entrie story in one sitting and i love it! please update! I want to read more!! Great job! I love it

HUZZAH! You updated yet again! I am overjoyed! Very sexy chapter, and very cute! Thank you! Can't wait until the next chapter!