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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14 -- Well, they're both pretty much gone on each other now, aren't they? I'm getting a kick out of how you have Riki flip-flopping back and forth with the 'cant help touching him' and the 'i hate him forever'. It's cute. I look forward to more of your story -- it sounds like push is coming to shove and Iason's going to get into trouble with his boss ...
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was my favorite chapter, too--so far. Quid pro quo is the name of the game is all (real) relationships, I guess.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you’re quite right – not only Riki, here they both, Riki and Iason, had to give up on some things to be able to coexist together. Both too damn prideful to admit that they need each other more than anything else. Yeah, what a surprise it had been for Iason when it appeared that a mongrel, a scum, had enough pride to feed them both, heh What an intrigue for a Blondie…
Anyways, well written! Waiting for the next chapter!
Anyways, well written! Waiting for the next chapter!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Iason is screwing around with the way his entire economy works! Ms PacMan is not gonna be happy! I think my favourite part of this is Riki's unwillingness to admit the power Iason's sexual attraction has on him. Fighting every step of the way down!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Iason realized Riki must be fighting him, refusing to be aroused" -- I like the guerilla warfare turn this has taken, with Riki using all the small weapons he has and Iason struggling to NOT deal with having actuall....*gasp!* feelings!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 -- A pet for his pet. LOL This seems to be more about Iason's training... Seems like the trade talks are exposing his unusual relationship with Riki to more eyes... What would his peers do if they knew he was having sex with a pet! Goodness!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I just wanted to say that I have been enjoying this story very much. Unfortunately, I always read it in the morning when I come home from spending all night at work and I'm usually too tired to review, but 14 chapters is too long to go without telling you I appreciate the passions and conflicts of your story to send me off into happy little Angsty/Yaoi dreams when I am finished. Please keep up the good work. :D
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is by far my favorite chapter! I think you've truly captured Riki's dilemma in his thoughts. On the one hand, he feels the need to rebel, but on the other, he cannot deny his attraction to Iason.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 -- Gets more interesting with each chapter. The exchanges between Daryl and Riki are very well done... I imagine that true friendship when you're a slave is a difficult thing to find.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 -- Very interesting the way Iason is beginning to see his pets! He's in danger of "promoting" his possessions to persons. This is avery sexy, very hot but now, it's also becoming a really intriguing character study. Even better!