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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 - "They’re not my brand,” made me laugh! That boy gives no quarter! I like your Riki! And Iason is getting very adept at more subtle torture... Enjoying this very much!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yey for happy endings!!!! :D
and great chapter!! iason's such a softy ;)
and great chapter!! iason's such a softy ;)
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Geez... hard to say at ths point which of these guys is the more sadly damaged, mentally, anyway. Of course, I feel sorry for Riki here but Iason is also so abused in his own right... *sigh*
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't think there's anything I can say about your writing that I haven't said before, so I'm just going to write something completely off topic.
I just watched Alexander tonight, and I realized that I've been pronouncing all the names wrong! That's what I get for reading your fanfictions before watching the movies.
Okay, I must finish with great job, as always!
I just watched Alexander tonight, and I realized that I've been pronouncing all the names wrong! That's what I get for reading your fanfictions before watching the movies.
Okay, I must finish with great job, as always!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 -- I'm getting a slightly better sense of Daryl now and I'm glad Riki is too... very old dodge for coercing people; threaten them through other people.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't think this aff application lets you know what chapter the review is being filed under -- this is for Chapter one. Well, I was supposed to be somewhere else right now and instead, I'm here writing you a note! *smile* Your story sort of reached out and hooked me. I love 'power differential' stories and this one looks very very promising! Thanks so much for publishing it and I'll leave you more notes as I work my way through ... -- tM
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww... has to have hot water to drown himself! That's just ... awwwww. But, looks like Iason knows what he's about... people can take being kicked easier than being isolated, that's for sure.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! It looks like Riki's in for it now!
Looking forward to MORE, as usual.
D.
Looking forward to MORE, as usual.
D.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nono~! ur totally wrong abt no1 reads AnK~, i 4 example, am a great fan~! n i love your story, hell i love all ur writings they are amazing! plz keep up the great work~! :)
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo! 'Migosh, you update fast! In most stories i read it's like twice a month AT BEST! Again, very well written, very in-depth characters, loving the plot. Can't wait until you put up another chapter.