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by DrkDreamer

person AnonnaDonna
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. That last chapter was very sweet and loving. And VERY hot! I sense that the story is coming to a resolution, though. **pouting**
person katy
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like what your writing. I think that you have captured the essence of the anime and the novel, Look forward to reading more :)_
person AnonnaDonna
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if Riki was going to get his memory back and what would happen if he did. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
person ayachan
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* omg what's going to happen now?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! what a cliffie!!! ebil ;_;

anyway, haha, yeah, i actually am a fan of wk too
person Nautica
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!

At the onset of this story, there seemed to be some awkward moments in your characterization of Iason and Riki's relationship. It had nothing to do with your writing style; it was simply because I interpret Riki differently so I guess I could never envision him surrendering to Iason in any way. However, the more I read, the more I am able to get understand how you percieve Riki. This chapter totally did it for me. I can't wait for the next one.
person kaji11
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, one of my favourite author writing about my favourite anime! And furthermore, portraying a real sadistic Iason, yummy! Thank!
person kaji11
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG it's excellent!
person Suzie
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, this is so cute. Who couldn't like Riki? I really like the way Iason is just figuring out that pets have feelings too.
person Rawben
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
niiice. and i'm glad you're going to finish the story! it always sucks to read several chapters and then just get left hanging... ;)
person AnonnaDonna
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hooray, an update! A shower scene and cuddling a warm body in bed.... *sigh*

Oh, and positive reinforcement with *cigarettes*. That's brilliant!

I'm very sorry to hear that you won't be posting any more AnK here, though.

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