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for Team Rocket's Revenge

by SuupaUsako

schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awsome!!!!

I always love Tentacle rape stories, especially when it comes to tentacle Pokemon like Tentacruel raping Misty....

Best Tentacle Pokemon Hentai story EVER!!!!!!

If you like, you can read some of my stories too....

person Bishonen
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well it was kinda dark but kinda funny and where did she get the base ball bat oh and "a red bush is alot prettier than a blue one" is just a matter of opinion
With love; Imasuky Lomae
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, need to lear how to properly group paragraphs. As it is, it's bery difficult to read and keep track of who is saying what, who's doing what, and who's where. A clumped group of sentences a paragrapgh does not make.

And what's the deal with not being able to be married because they were forcibly raped by a tentacruel? I mean, seriously, this is the secons milienium. 2006. People have sex all the time before marrige. Granted, not with pokemon, but still.

And on anal sex. You can't just go and shove something in there without first preparing. Lot's of lube and such. Slowly stretching to be able to take something there. And just because it's a tentacle doesn't mean it's lubed properly. Even if it was, you after remember that the muscles of the anus are there to push things out. Something just slamming in there without slowly working it in to where they are relaxed enough and more receptive to having something invade is gonna hurt. A lot. We are talking tearing of the insides there, man.

Know your stuff before you start trying to write it.
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well dude, let me go one by one here...

I agree on the paragraphs, I will work on em.

The 'not getting married' thing is a joke certain anime use when someone sees a girl's underwear or such. I seen it used in Sailor Moon (by her teacher) and in DB GT (Pan), so I decided to just throw it in there, since it is an anime series and all.

As for the anal thing, most tentacles seem to just jam themselves up a woman's ass roughly. They don't seem to care about lube, preparing muscles and all that.
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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