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by Fanya

person Merafan
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, so hot. I especially love the description of Sano's thoughts, and how he came when the image of Mizuki's lovely smile passed his mind.

You captured his sexual frustration so well. I love it.
person Alila
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Keep it going! You really knows the characters, and therefore the story is more exciting. You know, I read several other Mizuki/Sano stories and they annoy me. It's so obvious that Mizuki and Sano would never acted that way, I mean Mizuki is pratically the essence of innonence, how did she suddenly get all wanton? Hana Kimi is the best, and this is one of the best Hana Kimi stories I have ever read! Very realistic!
person M
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful job..please tell you you've got more...
person moodiful819
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Write More Plz!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
See, i can haunt you about continuing this everyday in person. So write it soon. >< *shakes fists*
Awsome ~ ^^'
person Midnight Star
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad fic. Look forward to the next chapter. The only problem I have is that you need to put a space between your paragraphs. I enjoyed your story otherwise.
person lady_kail
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! That was a NICE bit of sexual tension.
Plus it's so in line with the manga.

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