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December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok ill admit yeah sure the characters may not be exactly emotional towards the actual anime. BUT people forget this is ADULT FAN FICTION meaning these authors make up their own stories based on their favorite pairing of characters. To me nothing is wrong with that. I just turned to the next chapter and saw you backlashing at moronic commenters. Your the author, and producer of ideas to the story. If people hate the storyline stop reading it but dont ruin it for everyone else who reads someones work.
Anyway I am enjoying thus far.
Anyway I am enjoying thus far.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very difficult to read is there someway you can separate the paragraphs? If not then you don't have my vote as a good story. I was getting into to until the paragraphs started to run in to each other like a car accident. Please go back and edit so it's much easier, and not for me but for everyone else.
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I read your story what happened after A took her inside what happened I am just wondering? But yeah good the story kicks butt you should totally keep going.
Maria
Maria
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update now the story is cool
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was good~
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and well, don't see too many major problems besides the paragraphs. then again i am not the world's formost grammer master. please keep it going!
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I hope you update soon ^_^
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really cool!!!I believe it is very original and interesting ^o^ Congratulations!!!!!! ^_-
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your stories are well wrighten so dont listen to jerks
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was nice, but Anderson is a priest, he couldn't do that :/