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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! YOU HAD TO STOP THERE???? Its coming along great!!!! Keep going!!! poor seres :(
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, you really do suck......GET A LIFE!! ...... NO..I'm just kidding! That was good! hope to hear more from you soon!
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it would be better if your chapters were a bit longer. Besides that it is a good story thus far. In my opinion talent is not needed in this world. I know people that have very interesting stories, but they aren\'t real good at writing. Just keep up with what you are doing and you\'ll be better. Even though it is a good story. ja ne
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I personally like your story. It shows a different look on the characters and...well it just makes it a little more 'intense' if you want to call it that. So what if you swtiched a couple things around or made the characters ooc just by a hair. A good writer can do that and still make a good story. So I say you should keep up the good work and add another chapter soon.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unexpected...it is quite good but you need more paragraphs so it\'s easier to read. Do you need a beta?
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story dont listen to those haters!!! You're a WONDERFUL author =D continue soon
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
..................YAY Anderson! (he scares meh) Anderson with a attemted rape....ON A FEMALE?!? thats new for me lol! usaly hes trying to get into alucards pants......or visa versa....
Weee Nice still hard ta read, Oh and thanx for no Cuddle-card. I've read many fanfic that have started out great,just to disapoint me with a Cuddleing and or Weeping Alucard. yuck...
Keep going! Update update! wee
Weee Nice still hard ta read, Oh and thanx for no Cuddle-card. I've read many fanfic that have started out great,just to disapoint me with a Cuddleing and or Weeping Alucard. yuck...
Keep going! Update update! wee
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Liked the idea that Anderson would try to punish her like that. Hehe. Keep up the awesome work!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there I like your story very much. It's alittle bit confusing just where you want to be going but I hope you make Alucard realize that Seras is the best that could have happening to him.... I am a total Seras/Alucard fan and hope you let him be the mate who seras will be together for the rest of their undead lifes. I also hope you will a little bit of training in this story so that Alucard can see Seras abilitys. I hope you update soon because I can't wait to see how will it go on.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a OK fic. I got a little bored with it since there was very little describtion in it and Ceras was very 'Un-Ceras' like. Alucard and Integra got a little out of character too. But I think with practice and some more work that this fic has potential. Don't mind what Anon said. Keep working hard and writing and you'll get better