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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, yes, there were some spelling and grammar issues in here...you changed the spelling of Krad into Kard near the end, and there were some other errors through the srest of the paragraphs too. I'd be happy to beta if you wanted to email it me though.
Interesting fic, on the whole. I was disappointed that there's only one chapter...
Interesting fic, on the whole. I was disappointed that there's only one chapter...
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really good, i liked it, you should absolutely continue!!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just luv your fic, and of course krad wanted daisuke who can resist him
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this was quite interesting. This was the first DN Angel fic I have read, so I have nothing to base upon.
There were numerous typos and grammar errors, but it was understandable... and maybe I'm being picky. *Gets picky when she sees errors*
Anyways, keep on writing. ;)
There were numerous typos and grammar errors, but it was understandable... and maybe I'm being picky. *Gets picky when she sees errors*
Anyways, keep on writing. ;)