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That was one of the most beutiful stories i have read i acualy shed a tear when tsuruko and keitaro died and i loved the idea of motoko seein both of them as they were when they were younger holding hands very star wars lol i hope that u do more stories of keitaro and tsuruko there are not enough. Keep up the fanfastic work

This story was so beautiful! ^_^

Wonderful story.

I really must say, your skill at writing is amazing, I've been on this site for maybe, 2 and a half years? I've read alot of fanfiction and I won't say yours is the best in any one attribute, you seem more like a jack of all trades master of none. Your ability to introduce characters that I haven't seen or known about in the manga's your stories are based on is better than most everyone elses I have read though. They show alot of emotion that many people try to capture but they don't quite nail it as well as you do and your lemons are quite nice. Ah, here I am saying you aren't a master in any one area and I'm babbling about how much better you DO seem to do in each area lol. Anyways, I loved this story, never could imagine Tsuruko and Keitaro getting together but you made it not only believable, but great. They really seemed to fit together really well, and the epilogue was really nice to, it closed the sotry well. All in all, like all your other Love Hina fics 5/5 awsome

As a male, I don't admit this freely, but your story actually made me cry.

You are quite the writer, and you made this story really come to life in a way I haven't experienced from anything related to love hina; not the manga, the anime, and certainly not the other fanfiction crap we all see.

Well done.

love the story. its one of the best story I have ever readed. Keitaro/Tsuruko pairing is my favorite too. just sad there so few of them. please make more storys of Keitaro/Tsuruko.

very heart warming story but also touching

that was nice start man the sex was hot

I have read your story. When Keitaro was left I was over come with tears. when he was about to leave the second time it happen again. and the lat time is when you reached the end of the story. which made me smiled and cry at the same time. I would like to know if you are going to do another story about the.

Excellent! I have enjoyed your work. I hope that you will be able to get past your block on the Aftemath story, unfinnished stories always nag at me. But i understand how it is to have ideas stop in their tracks. Until then, thank you for your efforts.