rate_review Reviews

I had the chance to look at the other reviews after posting my first. I have to say that I agree with all of them. Had I the skill you have with storytelling, I would not be working in the field I am now. I will be keeping an eye out for any further works of yours.

bueatiful. the best written work ive read in a long while. congrats!! too bad there wasnt a sequel, this one made my fav list. keep up the good work!

i actually cried reading this fic..heh you capture the story so well that i couldn't stop reading..well,i usually just skipped the unhappy part and move on to the happy one but this time i couldn't help but read all of them..i actually sympathized him and feel his sadness and hurt..i'm glad that i have a chance to read such a great fic..well i wouldn't even read this fic if i hadn't watch love hina..i'm also glad that i picked up the dvd when i can last week..keep at it..

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i have never reviewed any adult fanfiction because simply most of it is just written porn with little to no class. But this truley was a great work of fiction the complexity and maddness of many of the chracters came through with a new and far more realistic setting while at the same time keeping the chracters them selves truley express how they act.


The lack of a marriage cermoney in itself makes it even more realistic not to mention a women of such strenght and mental disapline would need a man like keitaro that gives even a more belivable base rather then other fanfiction writers have twist and turn the one chracter or another to become completly different to make a pairing of there chossing work.

I remember lending my freinds the series so they could see it only to tell me that naru should never have had keitaro and to be honest i also felt that way because simply the girl seems to have deep seated trauma about beeing betrayed or dumped that to be frank only a man with keitaros infinte patience could tolorate the women is a complete fool and lucky beyond reason. I also find it funny that motoko herself was in love with him in all truth she was the frist just her foolish fear of men distroyed her chance because she realisded she loved him when he alreadly loved naru and that man is as faithful as the grave, also nice touch about him dying soon after her death it truley felt like him doing somthing like that not to mention the man was virtually indestructable the only way i saw him dying was somthing like that happinging hell if she become immortal i imagene that gene that made only break a bone after the 2 years of intense abuse would fine a way to live on.



truely a beautiful work of erotica and love, even the sex scenes where done in a true sense of sensual poetry showing what making lve truely is the ultimate expresion of ones emtions for another

Absolutely fabulous. The ending even struck a chord with me. I'm a sap sometimes. Brilliant work. I loved it.

Great story man! It truly is one of the best Kei/Tsuruko fics I have read. Though I must say that I would have enjoyed to know what happened to the rest of the Hinata crowd. Did Naru get married? What about Shinobu, Su, Kitsune, and most of all Mitsune. She should have been at that funeral.

My bad...I meant Mutsumi not Mitsune...don't know what the hell I was thinkin

That... Was beautiful. I never honestly considered that pairing and the way you handled it was incredible. You win the cookie of ultimate joy.

I think the best word to describe this story is "Enthralling". I was captivated by the seriousness and the quality of this story. Where ever the bar for Tsuruko/Keitaro fics was, you bumped it into outerspace. I thouroughly enjoyed this and look forward to reading your other works.