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OMFG THAT WAS FUCKN SWEET IT IS SWEET!!!! friggn Toshiao is a asshole but yeah...ANGST ANGST ANGSTY OH YEAH!!!!

read this like 5 times over! its awsome! update plz! same with ur other fic 2!

I really would like to see how Keitaro is going to break it to Naru about his affair with Motoko's sister. Please update your fic as soon as possible.

Man. This story is beast. Really good, and it feels like your writing has improved. The chapters didn't feel unbalanced in terms of style or diction. Very serious and interesting plot, as always. :P I really hope you continue this - your work is as awesome as ever.

yo. you probably read my review on AFtermath on fanfiction. I stumbled on this and once again you outdid yourself. A masterpiece of sexual fantasy. Well done with the first chapter on vividly descrbing Tsuruko's and Keitaro's union. This applies to chapter 2 as well as Keitaro has his inner demons haunting him from his "experience." And the way you ended it, bravitisimo (sp?). Truly a great cliffhanger.

I love this fic and hope you will continue it ASAP.

As for Keitaro and Toshio, OH SNAP! What's worse is what Motoko will do but I think Toshio should be feared a lot more.

Update ASAP
rating 10/10

That cliff hanger for chapter two made me mad D:

Thats a great read. Though I was looking for more Aftermath when I came on- this is perfectly, if not, better! If your ever looking for a pre-reader, or just someone for idea's look me up.

As being a fellow fan fiction writer this story kicked @ss, and was very much worth the read. Great cliff hangers at the end of the chapters. I am very VERY much looking forward to the next chapter. Please write it quickly I want to read more.

Hehehe

Oooh if anything like that happened to me... I'd probobly shit myself... cuz' I don't fight too well.
Lucky for me though, I'm somewhat shy. My friend jen though I hated her for the first two weeks we knew eachother.
now we're close... we even throw innuendos around..... it is good knowing people just as perverted as i am.

*On the Author's back*
Hmm Comfy.............*Smiles evilly*

Interesting second chap and quite an intruiging confrontation.
I don't envy Kei-Kun at the moment though . I PITY him!