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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that when I first read the description I was critical of the fic, but after reading it I'm impressed! So far you've managed to avoid any cliches, and I am truly impressed that you have Random-sama as a prereader. I do feel that the sex scene could have used a bit more work, but that seems unimportant next to the actual story. Please update soon!
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story here cant wait for more!!!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is not just a lemon fic.hope there's more to come!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep on going! There arte so few kei/tsu pairings out there!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had been wondering what you were working on because you had stopped working on aftermath but damn I wasn't expecting this. Wow This is awsome I hope you get the next chapter up soon the suspense of a possible fight or something else happining is driving me nuts. Good work Keep it up.
Damn this is great fic.
Damn this is great fic.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a strory! I mean da...Well, it is...If I could think of the words to praise this story I would write them down!
I REALLY am dying for the next chapter! Please get it done as soon as you are able! *bows* I beg of you.
Until then I shall wait...Good luck and truly awe inspiring story!
I REALLY am dying for the next chapter! Please get it done as soon as you are able! *bows* I beg of you.
Until then I shall wait...Good luck and truly awe inspiring story!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is awsome so far and i cant wait to find out what happens next.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is one hell of a cliffhanger to leave off at. The story has been incredible so far and I hope you update soon!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow! great great story! im not good at saying which fic(or anything in a category) is my favorite but this definitly goes into my top 3 list, and ive read at least 150+(more likely lotta plus) love hina fics. vry very awsome! tsukei rocks!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cliffies r evil! another great chap