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i love it its a real good story. i hope chapter 6 is going to be up soon.

There isn't any lemon in the plot so far, but I still like the pace you've set for it :). The Hinata girls getting what they deserve, Shinobu getting a break from her burdens for a short while, and Mutsumi getting some well-deserved company :D.

I can already see several ways this story could go, but I'm looking forward to your own version over the one my imagination can make. Great job thus far. I hope you can continue this at some point. ^_^

This is an awesome story

Hiyo! Great story so far. Keep it up. I like how's the story is going. Though, could you turn this into a Keitaro and Shinobu love fic plz? I like those 2 together. ^^ anyway, keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to your later chapters.

this is a realy good fan fic those girls deserve what has happen to them so please update soon

Very nice, man! I simply can't wait for later chapters. For some reason I detect a little bit of something between Shinobu and Keitaro in later chapters. I could be wrong, but, only time will tell. So, please hurry! haha

I love your fic!! Finally Kei-Kun stands up to the girls!! Anyways, nice work (Gai-Sensei Nice guy pose with the sparkly smile)

please update soon
Hideto-Sama

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This made me giggle, Funny thing is i could see this acutally happening xD hehe update soon ^____^ >< not to sound all pervy but are there gonna be Lemons <_< >< im not usually a preve but i just wanna know

Oh, before I comment, I'm letting you know that I am not a member of this site....yet. =)

I really, really like the way you are writing this story. I love the way you are conducting Keitaro in the manner that you are doing. I have always wanted to see Keitaro just lose it and do something similar to this. I feel for him whenever the girls of the Hinata house are bullying him like that, especially since he likes them in each of their own ways. *nod*

I also love the fact that all of your characters are very much In Character. I can so see everyone doing everything like they are now, though you do make Mutsumi sound a little more like an airhead than what I would normally see. Then again, she is like that much of the time anyway. Very waffy, in a way, she is. So, all in all, you are perfect with every character.

I love where this is going too!! Keep up the good work. I wanna read more about what Tsukuro will do to everyone, and how Keitaro might be looked upon in a better light. =D

Hope to see you update soon. =)

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This is a good story, I love the plot. I haven't read a love hina story in awhile and I gotta say this one has me hooked. Keep up the good work!